Ocean

Melodious surf
Lapping the pebbly sand
Deceptively calm

 

7/28/15 update: Shared today for the dVerse Poets Pub prompt on nature.

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20 responses to “Ocean

  1. Oh, now this is very good. You’ve completely mastered the turn from the first two lines to the last. A haiku master, to be sure.

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  2. the world beneath the waves is wonderful, and the sound of the sea, a blessing. Lovely senru

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  3. oh yes, those waves seem so calm, and yet they contain so much power. Beautiful haiku!

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  4. def love the simplicity and calmness of this

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  5. Oh yes.. without the biggest
    waves the
    smallest
    calm
    will never
    be..:)

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  6. turmoil underneath ??? πŸ™‚

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  7. “Deceptively calm” key to unlock the oceanic character…

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  8. I have experienced that…and miss it!

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  9. Lovely and peaceful….ocean waves are hypnotic.

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  10. the calmness may be on the surface only…sometimes we have to watch for deeper storms

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  11. Strong, beautiful, & lovely! Cheers!

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  12. Yes, deceptively calm, as we are at times. Lovely lull of ocean waves.

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  13. That last line describes the ocean very well: Deceptively calm

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  14. Such a delightful depiction of the ocean πŸ˜€

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  15. X

    AH, the rhythm of the ocean is definitely restorative. It is like a meditation in and of itself, just listening to it lap the shores. Nice change of scenery.

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  16. See? Beautiful choice of words….melodious and lapping…..definitely can’t go wrong with Hawaii and the ocean πŸ™‚

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